this plot bunny be wordy

[avamclean]

4000+ words and I'm just reaching the prompt? What the hell, muse? I was thinking 1000, 1500 words top from the prompt this week.

Grayson, you are wordy sonofabitch.

*wanders back to finish*  

Comments

[polgara-5.livejournal.com]

I'm not complaining. :D More words from you? Whoo hoo!!!!

[avamclean.livejournal.com]

I didn't think you would complain. ;) And it is posted!

[sulien.livejournal.com]

I agree with Pol, wordy is good! And I love the way you're fleshing out Grayson's character, which I forgot to mention in the feedback for that chapter. Your Muse knows what it's doing. :)

[avamclean.livejournal.com]

Wordy can be bad too. Depends on what I'm going on and on about. I did shave about 200 words off during the editing process.

Thank you! Grayson and Emma might be sticking around so I'm giving him a chance to become more developed. :)