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First I love this so much. You write Buffy and Dean so well together, and although the short smut you write is always good, I liked the fact that you wrote a story leading up to the smut in this case.
Also, am I one of the only people who was thinking totally clean thoughts when they read the last few lines? I was thinking 'how sweet they worked together to kill a demon or spirit, that's nice.' Then I read all the comments and it made me think much more interesting and needless to say dirty thoughts.
How about this for a future story? One year later and Dawn brings her boyfriend/friend Sam home from Stanford... how will Buffy hide the fact that she slept with both his brother and his father? Well she gets very drunk one night and her and Sam...
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Date: 2007-07-06 08:32 pm (UTC)First I love this so much. You write Buffy and Dean so well together, and although the short smut you write is always good, I liked the fact that you wrote a story leading up to the smut in this case.
Also, am I one of the only people who was thinking totally clean thoughts when they read the last few lines? I was thinking 'how sweet they worked together to kill a demon or spirit, that's nice.' Then I read all the comments and it made me think much more interesting and needless to say dirty thoughts.
How about this for a future story? One year later and Dawn brings her boyfriend/friend Sam home from Stanford... how will Buffy hide the fact that she slept with both his brother and his father? Well she gets very drunk one night and her and Sam...